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HOW JAMAA EARNED ITS FIRST ANIMALS
It was a long and Sunny afternoon. The plants of Jamaa were happily soaking in the Summer sunlight and Zios admired his beautiful creation. However, even though Jamaa was beautiful enough, it wasn't... lively. Jamaa needed some form of life that would lead Jamaa and take charge. Zios waited for someone to discover Jamaa- and that would be the dominant form of life.

Back in the Human World, Animals were treated horribly. Humans would perform many experiments on them and wonderful animals were vanishing- fast.

One rainy day, an intelligent bunny named River realised the Animals need to escape from the Human world- into a different land where the Animals would take charge and live in a great environment. Where Animals would have the fun they were meant to have.

And so, River and a couple of other bunnies she chose- Golden,Vine and Icicle started their campaign. The first thing they did was head towards the British Coast where a cruise would be starting, heading towards a portal Scientists have recently discovered. The bunnies have planned to sneak on the ship and go through the portal in hopes of an empty land, and they would stop the humans from going on.

It was the day of the cruise. It was a pleasant morning and the bunnies awoke in their burrow.
''Come on guys, wake up'' said River, shaking Golden,Icicle and Vine out of their sleep.
''Err...coming...'' mumbled Icicle, sleepily.
''Can you make us breakfast?'' asked Golden
''No time for that!'' snapped River, heading out of the burrow. Hesitantly, the other bunnies followed on.

The cruise ship was like a beautiful swan on a giant lake- but sadly, it was not. It was an evil creation of pipes, fuel and machinery that would destroy the habitat of many marine animals.
''Come on guys, let's sneak on to the lower deck'' suggested River
''Great idea'' agreed Vine.

The lower deck was empty and the hum of the engines was particularly loud, but the bunnies were used  to this sort of environment.
''Wanna play a card game anyone?'' whispered Icicle
''Sure, but we're gonna have to be quiet'' answered River
''I'm in'' added Golden
''I'll read a book'' said Vine.

The bunnies were incredibly intellectual and found their own entertainment, but the concern arose when the mechanical voice said:
''We will reach our destination in 5 minutes''
''Right guys, it's up to us now. Everyone get your boards and armbands'' instructed River.
''Okay'' chorused the three remaining bunnies, taking their boards and armbands out and putting them on.
''Right. I will now open the door. Golden will get the boat out and then we will climb on. We all have our oars, right? And hold on to your boards and armbands in case.'' said River, with a stern hint in her voice.
''Got it'' said Vine, and all the other bunnies nodded their heads in agreement.

River opened the door and the dark ocean waves were visible. A swirling portal was visible too. Golden removed the boat from its position and let it float on the cold, deep water. Icicle rushed to hold it in place and the bunnies hopped on .
''Man, this is scary...'' complained Golden.
''Yeah, I have to agree with you on that one. Everyone get their oars out and start rowing!'' commanded River.

It was in a matter of time that the portal was only seconds away from them.
''Guys, the humans are nearing!'' mentioned Vine.
''I know, this is a very frantic situation...'' gasped Icicle.
''Think about it... the humans have no way to get down!'' laughed River.
''Just get through the portal already!'' screamed Golden, and she then vanished through the swirling mass of colours.
''Mother of god...'' said River, astonished. She then inhaled sharply and hopped through, leaving the boat shaking.
''I'm next'' said Rose, and she hopped through and left Icicle alone.
''Ugh!'' complained Icicle, as the boat shook so violently... too  violently... in fact, so violently Icicle fell. Gasping for air, quickly made it to the surface and kept afloat using her armbands. Sitting on her board, she gasped in shock as she saw the boat has been popped... by a menacing human. This will be hard...

A frantic race for the peace of Animals, Icicle thought she was going to die. What will she jump off? A sudden thought came to her... her board! Frantically, swimming closer to the portal, she finally stood up, slipped, but restored her balance and finally hopped into the portal....

TO BE CONTINUED! XD Do you like it? :C


1 comment:

  1. Awesome story! Continue with these pretty please? ^-^ And a question: Are we allowed to comment our own stories in the comment section? Thanks, and keep up the great work!
    ~Silentflight

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